Paper 2 Giving Me White Hairs

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At first, I thought writing Paper 1 was difficult. Boy was I wrong. I'm pretty sure I have white hairs now. Ha! To be completely honest, I procrastinated on this assignment, but I absolutely regret my decision. When I first started, I thought I had my outline in order the way I wanted to write my paper, but, when re-reading what I wrote, it was pretty obvious my brain was all over the place. One of the most frustrating things about this paper was picking out parts of the book that is connected to MY most meaningful way of being in a place. 


I was able to find a bunch of different parts of the book that I could relate to, but the more parts I added to my paper, the more difficult it was for me to give a detailed, yet straight to the point explanation. I had to take several breaks between writing because my head felt like it was spinning, and I lost focus on what I wanted to write about. After sitting and thinking about the organization of my paper, I was able to figure out my introduction, my five major points and the conclusion. Slowly, but surely, my paper came together.

I don't think I did my very best on this paper, I believe there is a lot more room for improvement, but as a draft for peer review, I think I did a decent job.

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